Need help on the zombie/green Baboon deck Idea?

[CHRIS SMITH]

monster 20
2 Green Baboon, Defender of the Forest
3 gaint rats
2 Goblin Zombie
1 spirit reaper
1 Mezuki
2 Zombie Master
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 PLAGUESPREADER ZOMBIE
1 il blud
1 krebon
3 pyramid turtles
1 Neo-spacian Grand mole
1 ryu kokkis

spells 15
2 Allure of Darkness
1 Brain Control
3 book life
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Smashing Ground
1 Burial from a Different Dimension
1 Card of Safe Return
2 Foolish Burial
1 Heavy Storm
1 Monster Reborn


traps 6
3 Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
1 Crush Card Virus
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Mirror Force

Need help on making this deck better and faster? Can you help me on redoing this deck.

[Anthony"Mr.Regionals2009"Lauth]

the deck is good. maybe you should add ryko's because its a beast and it will help fill ur grave.take out ill blud.it sucks.

-iil blud
-1 giant rat

+2ryko

thats what i would do. and take out 1 pwwb