What about that deck??need fix and suggestions!

[Xaris George]

i made this deck here so that you can fix it and then buy the cards that really need!thanx to everybody!

monsters:

1 il blud
1 vampire lord
1 cyber dragon
1 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
1 krebons
1 phychic commander
2 zombie master
2 pyramid turtle
1 cyber valley
1 dd crow
1 phantom chaos
1 phantom dragon
1 goblin zombie

17 monsters...i need 3 more! help me please!(is there any way to fit in there a sacred phoenix of nephthys?its my favorite...)
also thinking of gorz,armaggedon night,dd warrior lady

spell:

1 brain control
1 lighning vortex
1 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 call of the mummy
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
1 allure of darkness
1 card destruction
1 smashing ground

10 spells..anything to add or remove?

trap:

1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 solemn judgment
1 bottomless trap hole
1 dimensional prison
1 torrential tribute
1 sakuretsu armor
1 dust tornado
1 divine wrath
1 magic jammer

anything to add or remove?thinking of skill drain maybe,mirror force if i have the money AND for that,deck devastation virus,..

[BadKyat]

no offense, but those cards suck unless in a deck built around them. its like tossing judgment dragon in a blackwing deck. using cards that work well with the entire deck is the way to go, not using cards that look shiny or pretty. the cards you use in a deck should work in conjunction with almost all your other cards in it. you can toss them in but they'll be a waste of space and time unless winning isn't a priority....

Xaris George said:

Yes thank you very much i like this format but i dont have a Dark armed dragon and i wont gine 40 euro for one card..first i will buy all the others that i need and then maybe dad.Please someone tell me about sacred phoenix of nephtys and phantom chos or phantom dragon! there is no way that i can use them?
BadKyat said:

monsters:18
1 il blud
2 ryo kokki 2 goblin zombie 1 spirit reaper
3 zombie master
3 pyramid turtle
1 dark armed dragon
1 Gorz
1 plaugespreader
1 mezuki
2 ryko the lightsworn hunter

spell: 13
2 foolish burials
2 burial from the different dimension
3 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
2 allure of darkness
1 monster reborn
2 creature swap

trap:8
2 phoenix wing wind blast
2 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
2 threatening roar
1 mirror force

this is the updated zombies from last format. easy to use and quite deadly

[GNeo]

well all those other cards can go into you side deck, for those "just in case" moments like when you go up against a macro, or little city.

[GNeo]

Xaris George said:

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P

Phantom of chaos isn't really a bad card for dark type decks, but it is a 1 turn trick. and depending on how you build your deck, it can either help or be a poor blocker. example if you build zombie deck with DAD or any of the sort ( i.e. snipe hunter, zombie master) it can be helpful, remove DAD, phantom gains effet, blast your oppnent's field. example 2 build w/o DAD or with monarchs, nephthys/mezuki's it wont help much because monarch's use their effect when summoned, and nephthys/mezuki's effect comes from the grave, and that's when phantom's effect stops when in the grave. i mean you'll get a nice high attacker but you won't be able to inflict damage on you opponent, just destroy his monster
as for phantom dragon, the price is not worth it; yeah it's a lvl 8, yeah it can be special summoned when ur opponent special summons, but it takes up 2 of your monster zones. it doesn't help if your running zombies, and such. if you want one that can, use cyber dinosaur, lvl 7 light, 2500/1900 machine. it's a shonen jump promo. and if you put zombie world in you can bring it back with book of life.very little draw back

[Xaris George]

UPDATED!!

added:
1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 goblin zombie
1 book of life
1 phychic commander
1 mystical space typhoon

removed:
1 dust tornado
1 magic jammer
1 call of the mummy
1 phantom chaos
1 phantom dragon

monsters:

1 il blud
1 vampire lord
1 cyber dragon
1 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
1 krebons
2 phychic commander
2 zombie master
2 pyramid turtle
1 cyber valley
1 dd crow
2 goblin zombie
1 sacred phoenix of nephtys(i want that in even if it does not fit...)

spell:

1 brain control
1 lighning vortex
2 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
1 card destruction
1 smashing ground
do i need allure of darkness?????also i think about burial from a different dimension but only if i manage to buy dark armed dragon.right?


trap:

1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 solemn judgment
1 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
1 sakuretsu armor
1 mystical space typhoon
1 divine wrath

[BadKyat]

not much of an improvement >.<<br />
Xaris George said:

UPDATED!!

added:
1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 goblin zombie
1 book of life
1 phychic commander
1 mystical space typhoon

removed:
1 dust tornado
1 magic jammer
1 call of the mummy
1 phantom chaos
1 phantom dragon

monsters:

1 il blud
1 vampire lord
1 cyber dragon
1 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
1 krebons
2 phychic commander
2 zombie master
2 pyramid turtle
1 cyber valley
1 dd crow
2 goblin zombie
1 sacred phoenix of nephtys(i want that in even if it does not fit...)

spell:

1 brain control
1 lighning vortex
2 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
1 card destruction
1 smashing ground
do i need allure of darkness?????also i think about burial from a different dimension but only if i manage to buy dark armed dragon.right?


trap:

1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 solemn judgment
1 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
1 sakuretsu armor
1 mystical space typhoon
1 divine wrath

[Personius [Aizen]]

oops yeah i was thinkin about Return From The Different Dimension but mixed it up with Escape From The Dark Dimension lol

[Xaris George]

instead of leaving comments like "not much of an improvement" why dont you just help to be better?What do you believe i still have to remove and what to add?

[kjay]

MST isnt a trap LOLS. i suck at zombies, but you HAVE to take out Vampire Lord, and Nephthys. Try not to run the tuners you have, because im guessing your synchros suck. Sakuretsu armor isnt the greatest trap these days, so switch it out for another bottomless. OR you could just wait till you get the cards to make Neil's build, which looks solid.

[GNeo]

here try this

monsters:21

1 il blud
1 vampire lord - (iffy low attack, effect only works when destroyed by effect)
1 cyber dragon
2 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
3 krebons
2 ryu kokki
2 zombie master
3 pyramid turtle - special summon higher zombies
2 goblin zombie
1 mezuki - special summon zombies
1 sacred phoenix of nephtys (iffy - effect only works when destroyed by effect)

spell: 14-15

1 lighning vortex
3 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
1 monster reborn
1 mystical space typhoon
1 call of the mummy - special summon higher zombies
2 allure of darkness - draw power
2-3 zombie world - every monster zombie, better summoning

trap: 8

2 phoenix wing wind blast
2 solemn judgment
2 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
1 return from a different dimension - return removed monsters

total 43-44

Sidedeck 11
2 cyber valley
3 dd crow
2 phantom chaos
2 divine wrath
1 D.D.R. different dimension reincarnation
1 dark armed dragon

remember zombies swarm, thats their power. special summon from grave, etc..

[GNeo]

yes you need allure. zombies are mostly dark types, and there is no draw power except for card of safe return (which is 1 card) the key to every deck is the ability to replenish your hand. if you can't do that you have to wait for key cards, and if you dont have good blockers/ attackers waiting can cost you the game.
burial from a different dimension just returns them to your grave, you can add it if you want but it doesn't help if you can't defend your life points. best bet add it to your side deck.

[GNeo]

if you really insist on having sacred phoenix, try use Dark Nephthys. Description: If this card is in your hand and there are 3 or more DARK monsters in your Graveyard, you can remove from play 2 of them to send it to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card. it's not as powerful as sacred phoenix, but it still can destroy spell/trap card.

[Xaris George]

what about making the deck zombie skill drain?adding 2-3 skill drain,malevolent mech goku en,creature swap,paladin of the cursed dragon maybe. I like light zombie skill drain but i cant afford 3 honest and 2-3 thunder king rai-oh.And something else..i'm thinking to buy a dad from e bay..but not for sure!because 1st i think that it is going to be banned when the next forbidden list comes out. 2nd,if i buy dad do i have to buy cards like dark grepher and armaggedon night?i dont want to buy them