What about that deck??need fix and suggestions!

[Xaris George]

i made this deck here so that you can fix it and then buy the cards that really need!thanx to everybody!

monsters:

1 il blud
1 vampire lord
1 cyber dragon
1 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
1 krebons
1 phychic commander
2 zombie master
2 pyramid turtle
1 cyber valley
1 dd crow
1 phantom chaos
1 phantom dragon
1 goblin zombie

17 monsters...i need 3 more! help me please!(is there any way to fit in there a sacred phoenix of nephthys?its my favorite...)
also thinking of gorz,armaggedon night,dd warrior lady

spell:

1 brain control
1 lighning vortex
1 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 call of the mummy
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
1 allure of darkness
1 card destruction
1 smashing ground

10 spells..anything to add or remove?

trap:

1 phoenix wing wind blast
1 solemn judgment
1 bottomless trap hole
1 dimensional prison
1 torrential tribute
1 sakuretsu armor
1 dust tornado
1 divine wrath
1 magic jammer

anything to add or remove?thinking of skill drain maybe,mirror force if i have the money AND for that,deck devastation virus,..

[GNeo]

Try this format

monsters:18
1 il blud
1 cyber dragon
2 caius the shadow monarch
1 spirit reaper
1 snipe hunter
2 krebons
2 psychic commander
2 zombie master
2 pyramid turtle
2 cyber valley
1 Gorz
1 plaugespreader

spell: 14
2 lighning vortex
3 book of life
2 card of safe return
2 call of the mummy
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
2 allure of darkness
1 monster reborn

trap:9
2 phoenix wing wind blast
2 solemn judgment
2 bottomless trap hole
2 dimensional prison
1 torrential tribute

dd crow's, mirror, skill drain, brain control, etc can all go to side deck.

the way you hav your deck posted; (not to be mean) is just like yugioh on tv, 1 of every card in deck so you can hav more combo's and everything is based on luck of the draw. when you start playing in tournaments and watch other duelist you will see they have 3 of each card that they need (or as many they need/ allow) in their decks. this makes it better odds of performing the combo's to win or to adapt themselves to their opponent's deck/ playing style. it's where if i have the card on the field/hand i can use the extra in hand to pay for cost of this other card and not worry on if i use this i can't use that, or etc. hope this can help

[GNeo]

it is?? 0.O my bad, oh well you can take it out and it will be and even 40 card deck but i hope the simple idea of how to build a deck helps

[Personius [Aizen]]

well from the looks of it youre deck looks like some kind of Zombie DAD without DAD lol. if you plan on getting a DAD you should add it and also it might be a good idea to add Plaguespreader and a few Synchros since you already have Psychic Commander and Krebons in there. if you want to add Sacred Phoenix you need to add Zombie World or its kind of a waste. what strategy are you going for? well heres my deck build added with your cards to make it a mix between mine and yours LMK if it works btw cuz mine is pretty good. with my new deck build my win loss ratio is like 10:2, its kinda like a Zombie DAD Synchro Zombie World Thing lol i just call it Zombie Cancer lol.

Monsters (22)
1x Dark Grepher
1x D.D. Crow
1x Il Blud
2x Goblin Zombie
1x Caius The Shadow Monarch
2x Zombie Master
1x Dark Armed Dragon
3x Pyramid Turtle
1x Plaguespreader
1x Mezuki
1x Exiled Force
1x Sacred Phoenix
1x Snipe Hunter
1x Necro Gardna
1x Armageddon Knight
2x Krebons
1x Vampire Lord

Spells (12)
2x Book of Life
1x Smashing Ground
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
2x Allure of Darkness
2x Zombie World
1x Monster Reborn
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Heavy Storm
1x D.D.R (Different Dimension Reincarnation)

Traps(10)
1x Magic Jammer
1x Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
1x Sakuretsu
2x Escape From The Dark Dimension
2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Mirror Force
2x Solemn Judgement

Extra Deck(10)
2x Revived King Ha Des
1x Doomkaiser
2x Stardust Dragon
1x Red Dragon Archfiend
2x Magical Android
1x Goyo Guardian
1x Thought Ruler Archfiend

k well heres what it would look like if i took your cards and added them to my deck and took some of mine out i play with 44 total so you can take some out if you want but you NEED Zombie World if you want to add Synchros/Sacred Phoenix other wise it will just leave you with less to work with. the thing about my deck is that using Zombie World i can freely revive any monster in my Graveyard to take out Dark Monsters so i can Special Summon Dark Armed. so my deck focuses on Dark Armed, Synchros, Swarming and Spell/Trap/Monster Destruction so i can work with any card i draw. every card i have in my deck has multiple uses so it makes things really easy to do what i want. well LMK if this works for you and what your opinion is.

[Duel Prompter Noah [GrimmJow]]

this is what my build ii dont playit anymore but if u wanna try it u no its pretty good


Monsters 18
x3 zombie master
x2 destiney hero malicous
x2 ryu koki
x1 dark grehper
x2 caius
x1 mezuki
x1 plauespreader zombie
x2 krebons
x1 ill blud
x1 dark amred dragon
x1 gorz
x1 armagedon knight

magics 12

x2 allure of darknes
x2 destney draw
x1 monster reborn
x2 book of life
x1 brain control
x1 mst
x1 heavey storm
x1 emerheny teleport
x1 burial from a diffrent dimension


traps 11
x3 solemn judgement
x3 bottomless trap hole
x1 mirror force
x1 torntiual tribute
x3 treatning roars

so total 41 cards if i can count right

[Xaris George]

Thank you very much for the suggestions guys.
i dont have DAD and i don't think that i'll buy one soon....
GNeo i will try to add more copies of each card,you're right.i have a second zombie master,i'll buy one more bottomless,krebons,commander and book of life.also why skill drain for side deck?what about if i add 2 or 3 of them?but i'm scared that it will negate il blud.. but i've seen a lot of zombie drain decks and they used both.

Personius thanx for the advise.I dont get one thing.why i need zombie world if i want to use sacred phoenix of nephthys?it is not a zombie.

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P

[chad]

really?il blud?i know its a nice card to get out with turtle, but to have to summon it again and risk a bottomless or torrential..is waste i believe. id rather run 3 turtles and 2 ryo kokkis because kokkis have higher attack and def and their ability isnt needed much in this format. so 2 skill drains wouldnt be a problem for that.

for zombie world, it makes ALL monsters on the field AND in each players grave yard zombies. so having il blud/doomkaiser dragon would favor zombie world much.

Xaris George said:

Thank you very much for the suggestions guys.
i dont have DAD and i don't think that i'll buy one soon....
GNeo i will try to add more copies of each card,you're right.i have a second zombie master,i'll buy one more bottomless,krebons,commander and book of life.also why skill drain for side deck?what about if i add 2 or 3 of them?but i'm scared that it will negate il blud.. but i've seen a lot of zombie drain decks and they used both.

Personius thanx for the advise.I dont get one thing.why i need zombie world if i want to use sacred phoenix of nephthys?it is not a zombie.

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P

[BadKyat]

no wonder you don't use it... two d-draws, two tagets >.<

NoAh "I Like Play ZombieZ" said:

this is what my build ii dont playit anymore but if u wanna try it u no its pretty good


Monsters 18
x3 zombie master
x2 destiney hero malicous
x2 ryu koki
x1 dark grehper
x2 caius
x1 mezuki
x1 plauespreader zombie
x2 krebons
x1 ill blud
x1 dark amred dragon
x1 gorz
x1 armagedon knight

magics 12

x2 allure of darknes
x2 destney draw
x1 monster reborn
x2 book of life
x1 brain control
x1 mst
x1 heavey storm
x1 emerheny teleport
x1 burial from a diffrent dimension


traps 11
x3 solemn judgement
x3 bottomless trap hole
x1 mirror force
x1 torntiual tribute
x3 treatning roars

so total 41 cards if i can count right

[BadKyat]

monsters:18
1 il blud
2 ryo kokki
2 goblin zombie
1 spirit reaper
3 zombie master
3 pyramid turtle
1 dark armed dragon
1 Gorz
1 plaugespreader
1 mezuki
2 ryko the lightsworn hunter

spell: 13
2 foolish burials
2 burial from the different dimension
3 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
2 allure of darkness
1 monster reborn
2 creature swap

trap:8
2 phoenix wing wind blast
2 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
2 threatening roar
1 mirror force

this is the updated zombies from last format. easy to use and quite deadly

[Xaris George]

Yes thank you very much i like this format but i dont have a Dark armed dragon and i wont gine 40 euro for one card..first i will buy all the others that i need and then maybe dad.Please someone tell me about sacred phoenix of nephtys and phantom chos or phantom dragon! there is no way that i can use them?

BadKyat said:

monsters:18
1 il blud
2 ryo kokki
2 goblin zombie
1 spirit reaper
3 zombie master
3 pyramid turtle
1 dark armed dragon
1 Gorz
1 plaugespreader
1 mezuki
2 ryko the lightsworn hunter

spell: 13
2 foolish burials
2 burial from the different dimension
3 book of life
1 card of safe return
1 giant trunade
1 heavy storm
2 allure of darkness
1 monster reborn
2 creature swap

trap:8
2 phoenix wing wind blast
2 bottomless trap hole
1 torrential tribute
2 threatening roar
1 mirror force

this is the updated zombies from last format. easy to use and quite deadly

[Personius [Aizen]]

yeah like Chad said making all the monsters Zombies makes it easier to swarm whatever you want and bring out the best in the deck. everytime you special summon Sacred Phoenix when he is destroyed by a card effect you can bring him back and destroy spells and traps but what if he isnt destroyed by a card effect then he doesnt come back. but with Zombie World on the field he can be brought back by:
Il Bluds Effect
Book of Life
Mezukis Effect
so in the end those 3 extra cards can Special Summon him back because he is now a Zombie, on top of that Monster Reborn makes 4 different cards that can keep him coming back plus it helps shut down the opponents Monarchs since they cant tribute for em. but you gotta make sure you tribute summon Phoenix before layin down Zombie World or you could use a card cost like Zombie Masters effect to discard him then just Special Summon him with a different effect or Spell. on top of that what i like to do is use Mezukis effect use Return from The Dark Dimension then when Mezuki gets destroyed by battle or tributed he goes back to the Graveyard instead of Removed (i checked the Rulings) and use his effect again. so in the end Zombie World makes the deck much faster and its useful in many situations

Xaris George said:

Thank you very much for the suggestions guys.
i dont have DAD and i don't think that i'll buy one soon....
GNeo i will try to add more copies of each card,you're right.i have a second zombie master,i'll buy one more bottomless,krebons,commander and book of life.also why skill drain for side deck?what about if i add 2 or 3 of them?but i'm scared that it will negate il blud.. but i've seen a lot of zombie drain decks and they used both.

Personius thanx for the advise.I dont get one thing.why i need zombie world if i want to use sacred phoenix of nephthys?it is not a zombie.

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P

[rnz-rlz!]

u cant use escape from the dark dimension on mezuki...hes an earth monster...unless ur talking about return from the different dimension...

Personius said:

yeah like Chad said making all the monsters Zombies makes it easier to swarm whatever you want and bring out the best in the deck. everytime you special summon Sacred Phoenix when he is destroyed by a card effect you can bring him back and destroy spells and traps but what if he isnt destroyed by a card effect then he doesnt come back. but with Zombie World on the field he can be brought back by:
Il Bluds Effect
Book of Life
Mezukis Effect
so in the end those 3 extra cards can Special Summon him back because he is now a Zombie, on top of that Monster Reborn makes 4 different cards that can keep him coming back plus it helps shut down the opponents Monarchs since they cant tribute for em. but you gotta make sure you tribute summon Phoenix before layin down Zombie World or you could use a card cost like Zombie Masters effect to discard him then just Special Summon him with a different effect or Spell. on top of that what i like to do is use Mezukis effect use Return from The Dark Dimension then when Mezuki gets destroyed by battle or tributed he goes back to the Graveyard instead of Removed (i checked the Rulings) and use his effect again. so in the end Zombie World makes the deck much faster and its useful in many situations

Xaris George said:

Thank you very much for the suggestions guys.
i dont have DAD and i don't think that i'll buy one soon....
GNeo i will try to add more copies of each card,you're right.i have a second zombie master,i'll buy one more bottomless,krebons,commander and book of life.also why skill drain for side deck?what about if i add 2 or 3 of them?but i'm scared that it will negate il blud.. but i've seen a lot of zombie drain decks and they used both.

Personius thanx for the advise.I dont get one thing.why i need zombie world if i want to use sacred phoenix of nephthys?it is not a zombie.

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P

[Kyle "THE BOSS"]

Yeah thats what he probably means because that card is boss and clutch in zombie decks

rnz-rlz! said:

u cant use escape from the dark dimension on mezuki...hes an earth monster...unless ur talking about return from the different dimension...

Personius said:

yeah like Chad said making all the monsters Zombies makes it easier to swarm whatever you want and bring out the best in the deck. everytime you special summon Sacred Phoenix when he is destroyed by a card effect you can bring him back and destroy spells and traps but what if he isnt destroyed by a card effect then he doesnt come back. but with Zombie World on the field he can be brought back by:
Il Bluds Effect
Book of Life
Mezukis Effect
so in the end those 3 extra cards can Special Summon him back because he is now a Zombie, on top of that Monster Reborn makes 4 different cards that can keep him coming back plus it helps shut down the opponents Monarchs since they cant tribute for em. but you gotta make sure you tribute summon Phoenix before layin down Zombie World or you could use a card cost like Zombie Masters effect to discard him then just Special Summon him with a different effect or Spell. on top of that what i like to do is use Mezukis effect use Return from The Dark Dimension then when Mezuki gets destroyed by battle or tributed he goes back to the Graveyard instead of Removed (i checked the Rulings) and use his effect again. so in the end Zombie World makes the deck much faster and its useful in many situations

Xaris George said:

Thank you very much for the suggestions guys.
i dont have DAD and i don't think that i'll buy one soon....
GNeo i will try to add more copies of each card,you're right.i have a second zombie master,i'll buy one more bottomless,krebons,commander and book of life.also why skill drain for side deck?what about if i add 2 or 3 of them?but i'm scared that it will negate il blud.. but i've seen a lot of zombie drain decks and they used both.

Personius thanx for the advise.I dont get one thing.why i need zombie world if i want to use sacred phoenix of nephthys?it is not a zombie.

Some general questions.. Anybody said anything about phantom of chaos or phantom dragon.Are they bad cards for my deck?i think that they'll help me..am i wrong?maybe :-P